looking for help with english comp1 paper

[cigarmonkel]

Originally Posted by HollywoodQue

And here's is your thesis statement, "law abiding citizen should be allowed to carry a firearm"

I was thinking about that but the problem with using that as a thesis statement is, law abiding citizens are already allowed to carry firearms. I might be able to tweak it a little to where it says something about how we shouldn't change the law that law abiding citizens are allowed to carry.